Wednesday, December 1, 2010

Writing Tips: #2 Creating A Character

I know that you have probably begun reading this with pre-conceived characters in mind.

Forget them. 

Now, once you've done that, grab a pen and a notebook (yes, I want you to use PENS AND PAPER).

We may begin.

When an author first decides to create a character, they usually begin by thinking of said character's name and appearance.  We're not going to worry about that.  At least, not much.  Why?  Because that isn't important in the grand scheme of things.  

Instead, we're starting with a blank piece of paper and your imagination.

So, you must first know at least the general setting for your story.  Is it down town New York?  A farm in the middle of nowhere?  Are you writing fanfiction?  Is your setting Hogwarts?

Okay, so if you already have your plot in mind, take a moment to think about how this character is going to affect that plot.  If you have no plot, hopefully it will sprout from this character.

First, on your blank piece of paper, start writing--anything that comes to mind about this person that you are creating that is NOT appearance.  Is the character an extrovert?  Is he arrogant?  Is she shy?  Write out the basics. What does he/she like to do in their free time?  Do they secretly love another character?

Once you've got a good idea of basic personality traits, answer this question:  What does the character want?  Does he want to study law?  Does she want to drop out of school?  Maybe he wants to sail to a foreign land or she wants to become a mermaid.  Whatever it is, that is going to shape the rest of the character.

After goals, write about habits and quirks.  Does he tap his foot whenever he's impatient?  Does she crack her knuckles when she's bored?  Don't, however, get too hung up on these things, otherwise they will come off as over-done in your story.

Give a brief family background.  His mom is a surgeon.  Her dad is a pilot.  He has six younger brothers.  She is an only child. Etc.

Then you want your strengths and weaknesses.  These are very important, and when writing your story, STICK TO THEM.  Of course, the whole point of your story might be so-and-so overcoming their fear of public-speaking, and that's different, but for the majority, make sure that you hold true to who the character is.

Talk about their beliefs.  He's a Buddhist.  She's an animal rights activist.  Their beliefs are important, because they often determine characters' actions even more than their goals do.  Does this character fight for their beliefs?  Or are they an agnostic?

Finally, do a brief likes/dislikes list.  But don't force it.  Don't force anything.  Just close your eyes for a moment and think to yourself: Who is it that I'm writing?  Allow your character to tell you rather than you trying to mold the character.

Do you have an idea of who they are?  Okay, go back over what you've written and decide is this person realistic?

What is ideal is balance. Do their strengths and weaknesses even out?  Is her goal something that a person of her skill and background would be able to accomplish? 

Make ABSOLUTELY sure that your character is NOT good at everything.  Maybe they are excellent at art, but terrible at sports.  Things MUST be somewhat equal or the character will be flat and uninteresting.

If you are going to create a character with a certain stereotype (cheerleader, geek, drama queen, etc.) make sure that you give them their own personality.  Think Peyton Sawyer from One Tree Hill.  She looks the part of cheerleader, but she is really into art and music underneath.  Don't make them so stereotypical that they have no actual thoughts and feelings.

Let me know whether or not this did you any good.  I can always do numerous posts on characterization.  Also, let me know what other kinds of writing tips you want to see. 

This is one of the characters in the Dominique story that I'm working on.  I hope the example is helpful . (:

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Love Always,
Kayla


11 comments:

  1. This helps a lot, I've been trying to find a way to establish a character for a story I'm writing. I think I'll take a page out of your book... literally. haha thanks... Cassie likes Orchids huh? Funny so do I! I also like sunflowers and black-eyed susans. :)
    Keep it up, I love your blog.

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  2. Thanks Kayla, this is really helpful. It's really helped me get a better grasp on my characters for my fic. I love these tips, they're so useful. Keep up the great work, as always :D

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  3. I love reading because of what you learn, what you never knew you never knew. Among other reasons, of course, but it's one of the reasons I love your writing: I'm never sure what I'm getting.

    I loved this exercise (I'm completely serious, it is so good and thought provoking, providing so much more depth to a character beyond physical, which I find myself focusing on very often.)

    Can I bother you with a sample of what I just whipped up? This character (no name yet, minor part until later) is a faerie in a story of mine. She's an Undying (one born from an Angel's tears, immortal) and Aura's Blessed, meaning she's basically blessed by the faeries goddess to be a Keeper of Knowledge, the Faerie Historian. This I knew, that she had blue eyes, wings, hair, and porcelain skin with undertones of blue to symbolize her position, but I had never really thought ABOUT her. This is what I have (or, partially, I really worked on this)
    -calm, thinks things through before speaking
    -loves, loves, loves history, learning, knowledge
    -enthusiastic, puts heart into everything she does
    -reads a lot, but also likes hands-on experience
    She met one of my bigger characters (the heir to the throne of faerie, which has been taken over by a tyrant) when she lived at the palace with him. They didn't know each other well until she saw him brought to the throne room to be reprimanded by his parents for running around with civilians, out in the woods, shirking duties and tutoring with the Historian (her master), etc. Anyway, she wanted to see more of the world she had read about, but she spent most of the time in the library or working around the palace that she hasn't really explored the outside, even though faeries live in the woods. She asks him to take her around, so he shows her his favorite spots, where she spends hours talking to rivers and sketching plant and animal life
    -Falcon (the heir) appreciates her quietude, how he doesn't have to pretend around her, outside of the palace they are just he and she, not Heir to the Throne and Aura's Blessed Apprentice
    -started doing this more and more (just the pair of them) and became good friends (Fal's other two friends, Ivy and Shade, noticed this but didn't meet Nameless until later)
    -She's like the soothing water to his flame, he doesn't always say what he feels, but he's always a raging fire, very opinionated, has a temper, just wants to do his own thing and hates it when others he doesn't like get in the way (and he never wanted to be Emperor) but she keeps him calm, thinks things through with him, they click
    -They (of course) fall in love, though neither admits it
    -Shade and Ivy (basically, his two only other friends (aside one guy that betrayed him, but this was supposed to be short... agh! I just wanted to share what you inspired me to do!)only got to know her during the Rebellion, after Falcon's parents were killed and the tyrant took over
    -Not pugnacious, sometimes has trouble standing up for self, Falcon hates this, says she should fight back, but she prefers dignified silence

    BELIEFS: -rights for all (even other species, who faeries don't trad. get along with)
    -very forgiving, always gives 2nd chance (not always beneficial to herself)
    -thinks faerie society is old fashioned, has ideas

    Wants to see the world and learn everything, which makes Falcon laugh and he listens when she tells him everything about what is interesting her specifically at the moment

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  4. I love reading because of what you learn, what you never knew you never knew. Among other reasons, of course, but it's one of the reasons I love your writing: I'm never sure what I'm getting.

    I loved this exercise (I'm completely serious, it is so good and thought provoking, providing so much more depth to a character beyond physical, which I find myself focusing on very often.)

    Can I bother you with a sample of what I just whipped up? This character (no name yet, minor part until later) is a faerie in a story of mine. She's an Undying (one born from an Angel's tears, immortal) and Aura's Blessed, meaning she's basically blessed by the faeries goddess to be a Keeper of Knowledge, the Faerie Historian. This I knew, that she had blue eyes, wings, hair, and porcelain skin with undertones of blue to symbolize her position, but I had never really thought ABOUT her. This is what I have (or, partially, I really worked on this)

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  5. -calm, thinks things through before speaking
    -loves, loves, loves history, learning, knowledge
    -enthusiastic, puts heart into everything she does
    -reads a lot, but also likes hands-on experience
    She met one of my bigger characters (the heir to the throne of faerie, which has been taken over by a tyrant) when she lived at the palace with him. They didn't know each other well until she saw him brought to the throne room to be reprimanded by his parents for running around with civilians, out in the woods, shirking duties and tutoring with the Historian (her master), etc. Anyway, she wanted to see more of the world she had read about, but she spent most of the time in the library or working around the palace that she hasn't really explored the outside, even though faeries live in the woods. She asks him to take her around, so he shows her his favorite spots, where she spends hours talking to rivers and sketching plant and animal life
    -Falcon (the heir) appreciates her quietude, how he doesn't have to pretend around her, outside of the palace they are just he and she, not Heir to the Throne and Aura's Blessed Apprentice

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  6. -started doing this more and more (just the pair of them) and became good friends (Fal's other two friends, Ivy and Shade, noticed this but didn't meet Nameless until later)
    -She's like the soothing water to his flame, he doesn't always say what he feels, but he's always a raging fire, very opinionated, has a temper, just wants to do his own thing and hates it when others he doesn't like get in the way (and he never wanted to be Emperor) but she keeps him calm, thinks things through with him, they click
    -They (of course) fall in love, though neither admits it
    -Shade and Ivy (basically, his two only other friends (aside one guy that betrayed him, but this was supposed to be short... agh! I just wanted to share what you inspired me to do!)only got to know her during the Rebellion, after Falcon's parents were killed and the tyrant took over
    -Not pugnacious, sometimes has trouble standing up for self, Falcon hates this, says she should fight back, but she prefers dignified silence

    BELIEFS: -rights for all (even other species, who faeries don't trad. get along with)
    -very forgiving, always gives 2nd chance (not always beneficial to herself)
    -thinks faerie society is old fashioned, has ideas

    Wants to see the world and learn everything, which makes Falcon laugh and he listens when she tells him everything about what is interesting her specifically at the moment

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  7. STRENGTHS: -wants power because of her words, she can compel, turn a crowd
    -strong, never wavering from personal opinion, but allows others theirs
    -loves to sing (big in faerie society)
    -laughs, light-hearted, emotionally available
    WEAKNESSES: -too forgiving
    -little naive (back to forgiving)
    -not most physical (though all faeries love to fly and run) but she prefers reading in the library or something to playing rough games and doesn't like to dance much (also big in faerie society)
    -terrified of blood
    -afraid of weaknesses, doesn't like to let on that she's hurt emotionally (very emotional)
    -not always sociable, but generally kind
    QUIRKS: rotates wrist, popping it, when reading, pinches bridge of nose when thinking, leftie, waves wings when very excited, which has prompted amusing sudden takeoffs in past

    Wow... so much for being brief. Nothing like that to help writer's block, eh?
    Thanks for bothering, and I have a quote for you. My art teacher was speaking with a kid in my class when he said this...

    "Too much happiness? No such thing." -J. Kociuba

    Thanks!
    -Ivyflightislistening

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  8. Hello Kayla My Awesome Beta(Yes you deserve the title cuz well, YOUR AWESOME) I love this tip it is reallly helping me with Lydia! Especially the tip about closing your eyes and imaging them. All I could see was Lydia screamin in my ear, " HELLO! I hate cheese on occasion, My favorite color is red because I look the best in it, and I HATE CATS!! Come on Micayla! And you say you created me!" xD Thanks for this it really helpps!!!:)

    -Micayla(:

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  9. Haha, yay! That's really great! I hope I'm able to write more useful tips! (:

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  10. Hey, Kayla, I've been reading your stuff for two or three months now and I gotta say, I love it. This helped tons and tons with one of my stories that's just been sitting there, dead, for a while. Now I have five- soon to be six- brand-new, original main characters!

    My personal idea, and I don't know if it's common or not but I like it, is I set aside a couple of pages in my notebook dedicated to this story and just wrote about their opinions on random things. I did a whole thing for this one girl about apostrophes, believe it or not. (She hates them, they're too confusing for her.) After doing your thing (which I also changed to fit my needs, but I think that you shouldn't follow a formula, you need to make your own way of doing things) and this opinion thing, I've never had better characters. Thanks so much.

    xoxo Jess

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  11. Aw, YAY! That's super exciting! And I agree with you--you definitely need to find your own way of doing things. That apostrophe thing is funny! (:

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